Blurb: Born the only female in an all male race, Jessica McClain isn’t just different—she’s feared.
After living under the radar for the last twenty-six years, Jessica is thrust unexpectedly into her first change, a full ten years late. She wakes up and finds she’s in the middle of a storm. Now that she’s become the only female full-blooded werewolf in town, the supernatural world is already clamoring to take a bite out of her and her new Pack must rise up and protect her.
But not everyone is on board. The werewolf Rights of Laws is missing text and the superstitious werewolves think that Jessica means an end to their race. When a mercenary who’s been hired by the vampires shows up to extract information about the newly turned werewolf only days after her change, they find themselves smack in the middle of a war and there’s no choice but to run together. When it’s up to Jessica to negotiate her release against her father’s direct orders, she chooses to take an offer for help instead. In exchange, Jessica must now swear an oath she may end up repaying with her life.
Review: While I did like this book and the general storyline behind it, there were several things that bugged me about it and kept it from being a much better book for me. For one, the blurb itself, which is what you need to read to figure out if you want to read the book or not, is actually a pretty big spoiler to the plot. If you are going to write a teaser, please don’t give away one of the big surprises of the story in that teaser.
Every book needs background basics for the reader to understand the current situation/world/character history, especially books that are the first in the series. What they don’t need, at least not if you don’t want to bore your readers, is dry, essay like descriptions that get dropped into the story just to get it out of the way. I felt like the first couple of chapters were so fluffed full of this level of background that it took away from a lot of what was going on in the plot and made it a whole lot less interesting. There are ways to introduce that information and keep the flow going and make it interesting for the reader to discover along the way. This book dropped the ball in that regard.
The last, big issue for me is more a personal taste thing. I much prefer stories that are either self contained or are the type that have small stories that fall along a much larger story arc across a series. I am so not a fan of books with huge cliff hangers. That is exactly what this book is. It opened up several different plot lines and none of them were resolved by the end of the book. I find that hugely frustrating. When you get to the end of a story, it should feel like a reward, even if it is a little one. You want to feel as though you have accomplished something or resolved something by the time you get to the last page, even if it is minor and I didn’t get that at all with this.
As I said before, I did like the general storyline despite the things that annoyed or frustrated me and, because of that, I’ve rated this as Really Good, but it is borderline. I do have the next book in the series on my reading list, so I’ll see if I still feel the same with the next installment.